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Sinking down,
Look around,
Slipping through the cracks.

Never knowing,
Where you're going,
Always have to ask.

You never lie,
You touch the sky,
You're never coming down.

Touch the wall,
Leave them all,
Go and wear your crown.

It's all a game,
They're all to blame,
It's never going to end.

So stand up tall,
Stand against the wall,
Prove that you won't bend.

It matters not,
If one is hot,
Only if one is kind.

You can fight,
For what is right,
You're not alone, you'll find.

You can win,
Against this sin,
And you can prove your worth.

Just stand up tall,
Back against the wall,
And throw them to the hearth!
Ehhh, was a quicky.
Sorry!
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:iconsaxophonechick:
SaxophoneChick Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
It's so inspiring and- to top it off- there's an adorable puppy picture!
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:iconcutevaporeon:
CuteVaporeon Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Omg!Heart 
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:iconinsertawsomeuser:
InsertAwsomeUser Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I mean another website animated it haha, they used it from this picture.
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:iconimatrollface:
imatrollface Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
o ma guod tis adorable :love: :hug: :love: :hug:


my heart just melted three times :hug:
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:iconredrose55x:
redrose55x Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOVE! IT! seriously, I'm like crying!
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:icondreaming-ari:
Dreaming-Ari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you =)
And I'm sorry you're crying.. =(
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:iconredrose55x:
redrose55x Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
don't worry, its happy tears ;U;
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:icondreaming-ari:
Dreaming-Ari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, that's not so bad XD
I am glad that you like it though =)
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:iconspunkyfreakster:
SpunkyFreakster Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wheres the pic o.o link mee
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:iconbjdgirl:
BJDGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012   Artist
HOLY CRAP,he's SO F-Ing CUTE!!!
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:iconmikalincow:
MikaLinCow Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awe it's like the size of ur hand so adorable <3
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:iconinsertawsomeuser:
InsertAwsomeUser Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Um, a website animated this, I don't know if they gave you credit..?
www.stardoll.com
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:icondreaming-ari:
Dreaming-Ari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This isn't animated though, and I found it on google ... I don't even know when.
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:iconprof9917:
Prof9917 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute! gonna.... dieeeeeeeeeee
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:iconecho-shock:
Echo-Shock Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
when I saw this the firs thing I said was OH MY GAWD!!! :)
very cut
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:iconmelodysyper:
MelodySyper Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
Really great~ Quite inspirational actually~
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:icondreaming-ari:
Dreaming-Ari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you =)
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:iconmelodysyper:
MelodySyper Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
No problem ^^
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:iconyikyik:
YikYik Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Cutest, cutie-pup ever!!! :love:
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:icongotik193feliz:
gotik193feliz Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
AAAAHHH!!! IS SO CUTE!!! <3
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:iconmalesx:
Malesx Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
very nice
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:icondragon-art14:
Dragon-Art14 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Amen to that!
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:iconmalesx:
Malesx Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
very nice
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:iconredhedsaysrawr:
redhedsaysrawr Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
excellent poem!
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:iconsolaces:
Solaces Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Typical.
A picture of CUTE WITTLE PUPPY that doesn't even belong to the writer used to lure people in to reading a pedestrian poem.
:yawn:
Moving along now...
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:icongrimm-reaper666:
grimm-reaper666 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Artist
this could really be made into a song
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:iconrjdg-rksb:
RjDg-RkSb Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful! Gorgeous! Talent! Fantastic! .. I got Nothing Else to say... I.. Wow!
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:icongrimm-reaper666:
grimm-reaper666 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Artist
is that a real puppy
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:iconcrazy-cute-pya-chan:
crazy-cute-pya-chan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hey, That text would be a grate song! Itīs just a little to short but it rally would sound good!!!
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yunasei Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Random PSA:

Be careful when buying a "teacup" dog! Those dogs are most likely forced to be born premature and are most likely not fully developed. They do not live as long as their normal-sized relatives, and are usually very unhealthy. No matter how cute they are, they're still a living being and we should not support the breeding of these premature puppies.

/Random PSA
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FUZZYWUZZYSWAG101 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
awh, I love the puppy~<3 beautiful poem!
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:iconorangepiehomie:
orangepiehomie Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. ♥
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:iconshinigami-shisan:
Shinigami-shisan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
SO CUTE IMMA DIE!
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:iconh-appysorry:
H-appysorry Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
these pictures on the stupid front page and all i get is a poem XD...
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:iconprojectsurreal:
projectsurreal Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
(AGREE +1)

Forget the poem, I want a print of the adorable puppy!
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:iconninjagirlkikio:
NinjaGirlKikio Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this sounds like a song, but yet again songs are poems
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:iconheatherbrezze132:
Heatherbrezze132 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Naww. :3 Beautiful Poem, Keep writing!
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:icondanielcoffey:
DanielCoffey Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Do you have prior permission to use the image?
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:iconayqdragon:
ayqdragon Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The poem is really good :3
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:iconsanityanthem:
SanityAnthem Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
The puppy is really cute, but I like the poem more. c: Very nice.
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:iconcopycat01:
copycat01 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it's sad that your writing is a second thought in most of these comments. I wonder how many ppl faved this just for the picture. fail DA
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:icondreaming-ari:
Dreaming-Ari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If I were to guess.... 95% or more. Kinda sad, but I can't blame them. That pic is cute, and most people don't pay that much attention from what I can tell.
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:iconcopycat01:
copycat01 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that just tells me that most people don't care about art- just cute pictures. And that's sad on an art site :<
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:icondreaming-ari:
Dreaming-Ari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know. It is, but you could argue the photo is also a piece of art.

I really do need to figure out something for the previews.... DX
Something that people won't fave JUST for that ><. It's unfair to them, as it is for me, aswell.
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:iconcopycat01:
copycat01 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
... I'm not going to get into preview images... i'm pretty against them

I think it's more unfair to you- I wish people would think about your writing before some random picture you can find off of google
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:icondreaming-ari:
Dreaming-Ari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know, but... not like there's anything that can be done about it, really. Online, things are rarely fair for the most part. So I can't really complain. Also, at least in using that preview image, it got my foot in the door a bit? Maybe? I don't know, trying to find an upside to this XD
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:iconsolaces:
Solaces Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
No, fail on the writer's part.
The picture doesn't even have to be there. You CAN submit lit without them, you know. But wait, then the writer wouldn't be able to draw attention to a poem that would be overlooked if it weren't for the cute little puppy.
hm.
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:iconcopycat01:
copycat01 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh I agree- I'm thoroughly against the lack of policing for cover images that do not belong to the writer, which they use for the wow factor.

but it is a poem above all else- it's still there. And it's a shame that the rest of DA can't get over the puppy enough to appreciate the art. So my "fail DA" includes the writer, but still those ppl commenting
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:iconsolaces:
Solaces Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Yes, fair enough.:3
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NinjaGirlKikio Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol, i must admit, i faved it for the puppy, but of course am gonna read the poem XD
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